Hum kitne baad naseeb hai...

[itschahat]

Badal kitne khush naseeb hai
Door reh kar bhi zameen par baraste hai
Hum kitne baad naseeb hai
Pass reh kaar bhi milne ko taraste hai..

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- Chahat

[Cyphor]

Your sher-o-shaayari is a nice piece of work to read. I love Urdu poetry to a great extent. I would like to give you a tip, as a friend.

When you write Urdu or Hindi using English script, it is important that the Urdu phrases and words do not sound ambiguous or confusing due to pronounication hitches. For example, 'kia' can be read both as 'kyaa' [as in 'yeh kyaa chiiz hai?'] and 'kiyaa' [as in 'Main ne pyaar kiyaa']. To avoid such confusions, there is a specefic writing style followed by people to write Urdu using English letters. This style is nothing but 'transliteration'.

Go to this website that has a lot of Urdu poetry presented using English alphabet and I am sure it will help you in many ways.

Cheers !

[sahil_2007]

Mahek kya hoti hai fizao se pucho,
Pyar kya hai mere dil se pucho,
tadap kya hai meri diwangi se pucho,
hum kitne tanha hai tere bina ye,
bhari mehfil se pucho.

http://www.indiabook.com/bbs/showthread.php?t=19352

[Cyphor]

Laakh Aansuu bahaayein magar tasalli naa huii
Marne ke baad bhi meri aankhein khuli rahiin
Intazaar ki aadat si jo huii

[jagan]

great! i like to read always in this section!

[Cyphor]

Dil ke andheron mein koii tabassum talaashte hain
Tuute khwaabon mein se koii tasavvur talaashte hain
Kahaan khoye the aur kahaan talaashte hain
Ham qaatilon ke sheharon mein nazar-e-meharbaan talaashte hain