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[indian lady]

When night falls
And darkness is all around
Till the break of dawn
No shadow no sound
The only voice I hear is your heart
Beating pounding longing for everlasting paradise
Matching your glorious pretty face
The highlight of the place
Like a burning flame
Seen from miles away
Like a sunset over the hills
Like a comet a cross the sky
Like a dazzling moonlight
Like a shinning star
In the middle of night
Like the brightest moon
Which eclipses by standing next to you

[alpha]

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[India1989]

fantastic poem. i will be gladly waiting for more poems.

[indian lady]

thanks

Thank u alpha and India 1989

I will write a new one these dayes.

[miqsh]

nice similes there!! looks like u are on the way to be a pro

[indian lady]

thank u

[indian lady]

When night falls
And darkness is all around
Till the break of dawn
No shadow no sound
The only voice I hear is your heart
Beating pounding longing for everlasting paradise

Greatings to all the members

[miqsh]

can i have a poem that is all about the beauty of the darkness??

[indian lady]

Ok I will try.